( 2 )乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。( 3 )登山便可领略其云海( c )、奇松( wondrous pines )、怪石( unique rocks )等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。 注意 1 词数: 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。 标准范文:The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It’s not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain , you can enjoy the sea of clouds , wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises , the sky looks very beautiful . It’s really a nice place to visit . 简单一点的范文(我的版本): The yellow mountain is in Anhui. It’s in the south. It’s a famous place. You can visit it. Every year, many people from China and abroad go there You can go there by bus. It takes about 3 hours. You can also go to the Yellow Mountain by train or by plane. You can see the sea of clouds , wondrous pines and unique rocks in the Yellow Mountain. In the morning, you can see the beautiful sun in the sky.
我的版本是只要有一定基础的学生就可以写出来的。之所以写简单一点。因为作文评分标准的第五档(最高档)的要求是: 写明全部或绝大部分要点。语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 我的文章也是第五档的内容,学生也更容易掌握。 先把02-08的作文贴完后,我会做一个总结。 2007年安徽中考英语作文: 例如你叫李华,你的朋友田甜将去英国。请你将她的基本情况介绍给你英国的朋友Rita, 希望她们能成为朋友,并希望Rita 能够去机场接她。请根据以下要点给Rita写一封信。 提示:1. 介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格以及爱好。
2. 田甜将去英国George Spencer School学习一年,并将乘飞机于8月1日下午4点到达伦敦希斯罗机场(Heathrow Airport)。 注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
June 26th, 2007 Dear Rita,
How is everything going? I’d like to introduce my best friend, Tian Tian, to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __.
Will you please be kind enough to meet her at the airport? Many thanks.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
标准范文: Dear Rita,
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