Saturday ,March  Fine

7 ,2009              

This morning ,I went to the XinHua bookstore .

I met a foreigner .He also went to bookstore to buy a dictionary.

He tell to Bookstore's assistant ."Could you give me a dictionary?"

But the bookstore's assistant didn't know whayt he says , he didn't know what to do ,so the foreigner and the assistant all were very vexation.

All the time I throught that I should help them ,then I talked with the foreigner in English ,and solve the problems.

           I  were very happy.

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